一篇英语记叙文,初四教师请评个分（15满分）AN UNFORGETTABLE THINGI"ve been in this middle school for 4 years.And now,it"s time to leave.There were many things which happened between teachers and me.But I would never forget the experi

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一篇英语记叙文,初四教师请评个分（15满分）
AN UNFORGETTABLE THING
I've been in this middle school for 4 years.And now,it's time to leave.There were many things which happened between teachers and me.But I would never forget the experience when I first talked with my English teacher.
It was a foggy day in the afternoon.And I was unhappy on that day.Apparently sensitive to classmates' criticism,I rushed to the office of my English teacher.I asked her whether I did something bad and she replied that I didn't.Then I asked.'Why are they so serious even jealous to me?' But her answer made me more doubtful.Her answer is that I haven't found the ture meaning of peace and happiness!She knew I couldn't understand.Then she explained.'If you can find peace in anything you meet,you'll find the true meaning of peace at that time.' I remembered what she said.When I first got to this school,classmates asked me to do things more quickly,I would often say.'Don't rush me.' But now,I'll say.'Would you please wait a minute before I complete it?'
I've been completly changed after this conversation.Thanks to my English teacher,I am more friendly to people around me now.I'll never forget it!Never!
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