早教吧作业答案频道 -->英语-->
请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多ShangHai Expo Bring Me A LotEverybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how importan
题目详情
请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多
ShangHai Expo Bring Me A Lot
Everybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how important to protect the en
The world expo to China promoted the economic development and promoting international cooperation,speeds up the domestic infrastructure construction,but also show oneself civilization,is a great opportunity.
The world expo let me understand to how can we get the environment
We should spitting,no littering rubbish,be a good citizen.
Let us work together,make the city more beautiful
Thank you listen to me
ShangHai Expo Bring Me A Lot
Everybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how important to protect the en
The world expo to China promoted the economic development and promoting international cooperation,speeds up the domestic infrastructure construction,but also show oneself civilization,is a great opportunity.
The world expo let me understand to how can we get the environment
We should spitting,no littering rubbish,be a good citizen.
Let us work together,make the city more beautiful
Thank you listen to me
▼优质解答
答案和解析
首先 第一句中的“bring ” 要改成“brings”用 第三人称
第二,“two thousand and ten Shanghai ”可以直接用阿拉伯数字 没有外国人会写一大长串的哦 直接2010就行了
第三,第二行中“Shanghai world expo held in China” 应该是被举行 所以应是 was held in china.
第四,“It iet us know that we have lots of proble now”改成“it makes us konw that we ourselves have lots of problem "
哎呀 我都无语了 我直接把改好后的文章写在下面 你自己看看错在哪里
Shanghai brings me a lot
Everybody knows that the 2010 shanghai world expo was held in china . It makes me know that we ourselves have lots of problem and how important it is to protecet the environment.
The shanghai world expo not only promoted the development of economy and,international cooperation and the domestic infrastructure construction but also a great opportunity to show chinese civilization.
The world expo lets me understand how to protect the environment.For example ,we should be a good citizen and never spiltting or littering.
let us work together to make our city more beautiful!
that's all. thank you for your listening!
第二,“two thousand and ten Shanghai ”可以直接用阿拉伯数字 没有外国人会写一大长串的哦 直接2010就行了
第三,第二行中“Shanghai world expo held in China” 应该是被举行 所以应是 was held in china.
第四,“It iet us know that we have lots of proble now”改成“it makes us konw that we ourselves have lots of problem "
哎呀 我都无语了 我直接把改好后的文章写在下面 你自己看看错在哪里
Shanghai brings me a lot
Everybody knows that the 2010 shanghai world expo was held in china . It makes me know that we ourselves have lots of problem and how important it is to protecet the environment.
The shanghai world expo not only promoted the development of economy and,international cooperation and the domestic infrastructure construction but also a great opportunity to show chinese civilization.
The world expo lets me understand how to protect the environment.For example ,we should be a good citizen and never spiltting or littering.
let us work together to make our city more beautiful!
that's all. thank you for your listening!
看了 请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上...的网友还看了以下:
Shanghai is the biggest city in China.Shanghai is 2020-05-16 …
.She was too excited to do any housework that mor 2020-05-17 …
in+一段时间(在将来时中)搭配的动词是否应为短暂型动词?在将来时中in+时间段与for+时间段的 2020-05-22 …
Sally’s never seen a play in the Shanghai Grand Th 2020-05-24 …
月份前一个用in一个不用in为什么?(1)MybirthdayisinOctober.(2)It' 2020-06-14 …
英语对钱提问用什么?还有对in+一段时间提问用什么?我说的是对in+一段时间提问,when使用在时 2020-06-30 …
普通话里面yin和in读法一样吗因为的因(yin)读音跟复韵母in经常听见有人说因为读成inwei 2020-07-28 …
用适当的介词填空1.Hearrived(at,in,for)Shanghai(in,at,on,fo 2020-10-30 …
在将来时里,in+一段时间是什么意思在将来时中,in+一段时间的意思我记得以前看到过说意思是“在多少 2020-11-01 …
in和on的用法hitsomebodyintheface和hitsomebodyonthenose为 2021-02-05 …