求哪位英语高手帮我修改一下这个论文摘要的英语吧!非常急!感激不尽!RuralEnglishinfluencefactorsoftoughquestionwhicheverywerediscussedAbstract:withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,eco-nomicglobalization,t

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求哪位英语高手帮我修改一下这个论文摘要的英语吧!非常急!感激不尽!
Rural English influence factors of tough question
which every were discussed
Abstract:with the development of science and technology,eco- nomic globalization,the demand for English talent increases laser.Since primary school education will grasp English.Present country- side area of the tough question which every primary school English is much more common.This will not only influence to their future English learning,but also to other aspects of learning produced nenegative effect,or even influence the development of all his life.The study found that tough question which every also have the desire to do better,so teachers should try to make tough question which every to make progress.Find our learning strategies disorders and tough question which every study motivation is not high.Analyze its characteristics and reasons,and find the effective measures,is our primary school English teaching workers urgent need to address the problem.
Keywords:countryside area; English; learning difficult student; influencing factor

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1.with the development of science and technology,eco- nomic globalization,the demand for English talent increases laser.首先,这句话因果关系有问题,为什么科技科学发展,需要更多的英语人才?其次,最后一个词laser在这是什么意思.
2.Since primary school education will grasp English.不明白在表达什么,主要是动词grasp不知道什么意思.education grasp English?
3.Present country-side area of the tough question which every primary school English is much more common.这句话主谓宾是the question is common.但其他东西不知道是什么,present在这里表示现在的意思?个人觉得可以用“currently,”代替；countryside area of the question,这个主语貌似表达有误.不清楚你表达的意思
4.This will not only influence to their future English learning,but also to other aspects of learning produced nenegative effect,or even influence the development of all his life.
Influence后面直接跟宾语,influence是及物动词,如果想用词组,那就用influence on；future Eng learning表达的也有点中式英语的感觉,其实就用Eng learning就好了,当然是future,总不可能影响过去的吧；but also后面的介词也要改；"other aspects of learning produced nenegative effect……"这句话语法也有问题,两点：1）如果你摘要中用other这样的词,后面一定要跟such as,或者for example或者至少举一个例子；其次就是语病,你想说的是这个问题会产生不好的影响,甚至影响学生的一生发展对吧?没办法放在一句就用两句吧:
This will not only influence their future English learning,but also other aspects of learning,such as ……(自己想一个）
moreover,the problem has negative effects,which may even influence the development of his whole life.
5.The study found that tough question which every also have the desire to do better,so teachers should try to make tough question which every to make progress.你的study后用一般现在时；Every后面应该跟点什么吧,是everybody还是everyone,不太明白你这两句里every的用法；如果用了every就不用have了,要has；make question貌似搭配不当,用use至少比make好,或者用set,其次是应该questions； 我相信你想表达的应该是：
The study concludes that:when facing tough questions,every student has the desire to do better,therefore teachers should try to set tough questions for the sudents so that they can improve themselves.
6.Find our learning strategies disorders and tough question which every study motivation is not high.Analyze its characteristics and reasons,and find the effective measures,is our primary school English teaching workers urgent need to address the problem.
第一句完全看不懂,希望你可以提供你想表达的中文意思.第二句,也是有些问题：1）你这里的主语是analyze+find的这两个词组,作为主语的话,应该是动名词或者to do的形式,鉴于你说的是学校老师应该做的,那就是未完成的,所以用to do形式；还是我来改吧：
To analyze its characteristics and reasons and find the effective measures should be an urgent problem to be addressed by primary school English teachers.
在文章中,is,are这样的词最好少出现,替换成may be,should be,must be,can be,would be,is likely to be这样的词,因为你的文章里的观点不一定是绝对正确或者被认可的.所以还是要谦虚一点.
最好给我一段你这个摘要的中文翻译.你想表达的意思我基本明白了.就是个别句子