检查英语作文帮我检查下错在哪?我很快就要,改得好加分.要求改出全部错.DreamFutureIwanttobeadoctor.Why?Becausedoctorscanhelpmanypeople.WhenIwasalittleboy,Ihavebeendreamingofbeingadoctor.Iwantolivei

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检查英语作文
帮我检查下错在哪?我很快就要,改得好加分.要求改出全部错.
Dream Future
I want to be a doctor.Why?Because doctors can help many people.When I was a little boy,I have been dreaming of being a doctor.
I wan to live in Hangzhou.And my parents like there,too.I know that there are lots of famous places.I can visit there with my friends.
I want to a big house with an interesting garden.And in the garden,there are many flowers.I will very good.
I will have many friends when I'm older.
That is my dream future.
我知道很多错 分我有!

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I have been dreaming of being a doctor.
I had have a dream about being a doctor
I wan to live in Hangzhou.And my parents like there,too.
I want to live in Hangzhou where my parents both like .
I know that there are lots of famous places.I can visit there with my friends.
I know that there ara lots of famous places where I could visit with my friends.
I want to a big house
I want a big house.
I will very good
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I will have many friends
I hope to have many fiends
my dream about the future