晚上6点前,Children'sDayiscoming.Iwenttozoowithmymum.Wewenttotherebuybus.Wesawsomeanimals,suchasmonkeys,birdies,horses,sheepsandall.IfeedsalotofbirdseedtosomebirdiesandIfeedsalotofgreengrasstosomesheepsint

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晚上6点前,
Children's Day is coming.I went to zoo with my mum.We went to there buy bus.
We saw some animals,such as monkeys,birdies,horses,sheeps and all.I feeds a lot of birdseed to some birdies and I feeds a lot of green grass to some sheeps in the zoo.I'm hungry.We intend went home.In the now,it's rain.We walk in the rain.
This Children's Day it was fun and terrible,I hope next Children's Day is wonderful.

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Children's Day came.I went to a zoo with my mum.We went there by bus.
We saw some animals,such as monkeys,birds,horses,sheep.I fed a lot of birdseed to some birds and I fed a lot of green grass to some sheep in the zoo.I was hungry.We went home.Then,it rained.We walked in the rain.
This Children's Day was fun and terrible,I hope next Children's Day will be wonderful.
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