请帮忙找出短文中的十处错误,并订正.（P53）MissGreenwasveryfat,soshewenttoseeherdoctor.Thedoctorsaid,"I'mafraidyoueattoomuch,ifyouwanttothinner,youhavetoeatlessfood."hegaveherabookandsaid,"Readitcare

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请帮忙找出短文中的十处错误,并订正.（P53）
Miss Green was very fat,so she went to see her doctor.The doctor said,"I'm afraid you eat too much,if you want to thinner,you have to eat less food." he gave her a book and said,"Read it careful,and eat the things,on page 11 every day.Then come back in two week's time." Miss Green came back again 2 weeks later,but she wasn't thinner.She was many fatter.The doctor was surprised and asked,"Are you eatting the things on page 11 of the book?" "Yes,doctor." said she."I eat those things at lunch time ,and I eat potatoes,bread,eggs,milk...at supper time."
打得好累啊-
看起来长其实很短的..

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Miss Green was very fat,so she went to see her doctor.The doctor said,"I'm afraid you （eat-->have eaten) too much,if you want to (be) thinner,you have to eat less." He gave her a book and said,"Read it (careful-->carefully),and eat the things on page 11 every day.Then come back in two (week's time-->weeks)." Miss Green came back again 2 weeks later,but she (wasn't-->didn't become) thinner.She was (many-->much) fatter.The doctor was surprised and asked,"(Are-->Have) you (eatting-->eaten) the things on page 11 of the book?" "Yes,doctor." said she."I (eat-->ate) those things at lunch time ,and I (eat-->ate) potatoes,bread,eggs,milk...at supper time."