帮忙看看我的英语作文有错没、先谢了MyEnglishwasdifficultbefore,butmyEnglishisgoodnow.IwillhaveasharewithyouhowIimprovedmyEnglish.Ialwayscouldn'tunderstandwhenwhotalktome.SoIwatchedEnglish-languageTVeve

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帮忙看看我的英语作文有错没、先谢了
My English was difficult before,but my English is good now.I will have a share with you how I improved my English.
I always couldn't understand when who talk to me.So I watched English-language TV every night and tried my best to understand what they said.And the best way to improved my speaking skills is by practicing conversations with friends.I also always made mistakes in English grammar.So I decided to take lots of grammar notes in every class and studied them on the way to school.Another thing I found very difficult was menmorized the new words.The solution to this problem is made vocabulary lists in my exercise-book and studied them in my freetime.It helped a lot.Now I'm really enjoyed learning English.
At last,I hope you can also become a better English-language learner.

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.Now I'm really enjoyed learning English.既然都是现在了,就不必用enjoyed 了,换成enjoying.第一句but 前后没有转折关系,改成bad .有个部分改成,is to make a vacubu…… 或者is making .还有when who talk to me who 前面没有名词,改成when people talk to me ,倒数第二段最后一句话,用现在时,你都用now 了