大学生自我介绍.（检查看看有没有语法错误~）hello!mynameis#.youcancallmeellieI'mashygirl~andIlikelistentomusic~Ithinkitcancalmmedown.myEnglishisnotverygoodbutIlikeitverymuch.Iwantedtobeatranslat

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大学生自我介绍.（检查看看有没有语法错误~）
hello!my name is #.you can call me ellie I'm a shy girl~and I like listen to music~
I think it can calm me down.my English is not very good but I like it very much.I wanted to be a translator when I was young~And nice to meet you guys!thank you very much.

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I like listening to music BECAUSE it can calm me down. THOUGH my English is not very WELL,I like it very much. I HAD ALWAYS BEEN wantING(过去完成进行时) to be a translator when I was young~ Nice to meet you guys! thank you very much.还有每一句开头大写,当然口语的话无所谓