这句话中有没有错误的?Ontheonehand,lawsmustbemaketosolvethisprobleminalegalway.Ontheotherhand,moreattentionshouldbepaidtothisproblembyallpeopletotakenit.Ontheonehand这个the要不要去掉?最后那个take

Question

这句话中有没有错误的?
On the one hand,laws must be make to solve this problem in a legal way.On the other hand,more attention should be paid to this problem by all people to taken it.
On the one hand 这个the 要不要去掉?
最后那个taken

Answer 1

the不用去掉
On the one hand.
On the other hand 是固定搭配
to taken it 可以去掉 太累赘了
如果你想用的话 要改成to take it