英文改错,还有个英文作文,1.Oncetherehadamanwhowassolazythat2.nojobwasfitforhim.Inordertomakealiving,he3.turnedtoaneighbourofhimforhelponeday.The4.neighbouradvisedhimbeacemeterycaretaker5.asitwasthe

Question

英文改错,还有个英文作文,
1.Once there had a man who was so lazy that
2.no job was fit for him .In order to make a living ,he
3.turned to a neighbour of him for help one day .The
4.neighbour advised him be a cemetery caretaker
5.as it was the easiest job one could find it
6.The lazy man was delighted and soon become a
7.cemetery caretaker .And to everbody's surprise ,he gave
8.up his job three days before he got it ."it's unfair ."
9.others sare lying still when I am the only one who has to stand ."
10.others sare lying still when I am the only one who has to stand ."
作文：
假设你班将举行一次英语班会,主题为“如何做一个好学生”.请你根据以下要点写一篇短文.短文中需包括以下要点：
1.自我要求
2.对待老师同学
3.遵循守纪
4.目标

Answer 1

1.had改为was
2.√
3.him改为his
4.advised him be改为advised him to be
5.one could find it改为one could find
6.become改为became
7.and改为but
8.before改为after
9.when改为while
第十句和第九句一样