请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.Yesterday,allthestudentsinourschoolweresupposedtogotothehilltoplanttreesArrivingatthehillat8:30,weweretoplantatleastfiretrees.Thenwestarteddiggingplantingandwatering.Weallwor

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请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.
Yesterday,all the students in our school were supposed to go to the hill to plant trees Arriving at the hill at 8:30,we were to plant at least fire trees.Then we started digging planting and watering.We all worked so hard that we finished our tasks ahead of time.Among us,Zhang Qin,our monitor set a good example for us.Finishing his task,he went on to help others without even a little rest.He was wet all over after work.“I must learn from him.” I said to my-self.

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Yesterday, all the students in our school were supposed to go to the hill to plant trees. Arriving at the hill at 8:30, we were about to（打算） plant at least fifty trees. Then we started digging holes, planting and watering trees. We all worked so hard that we finished our tasks in advance（提前）. Among us, Zhang Qin, our monitor set a good example for us. Finishing his task, he went on to help others without having a rest. He was wet all over after work. “I must learn from him.” I said to myself.