请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.题目是申请参加英语夏令营的防身术课程,内容报括想学到什么,为啥学.DearSirorMadam,IheardthatyourschoolheldthePartyofEnglishSummerCampandstartedthefollowingcourses,ga

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请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.题目是申请参加英语夏令营的防身术课程,内容报括想学到什么,为啥学.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I heard that your school held the Party of English Summer Camp and started the following courses,gardening,cooking,self-defence and nursing So I'm writing the letter to apply for it I want to apply for nursing and become a nurse.I learnt some medicine knowledge in middle school and I believe that I can learn much from nursing for example,how to take care of patients,how to give a patient's aid and so on.I must learn nursing so as to improve myself.I'm looking for your letter.
Best wishes
Wang YueHua.

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I was informed that your school held the Party of English Summer Camp and set the following courses, including gardening, cooking, self-defence and nursing. Now I'm writing the letter to apply for the nursing cause as I want to become a nurse in the near future. I have obtained some medication knowledge in middle school and I believe that I can learn a lot from nursing, for example, how to take care of patients, how to give first aids to patients, etc. I think it is a must for me to study nursing so as to improve myself. I'm looking forward to your immediate reply.

Best Regards,
Wang YueHua.