请批改（5）ALettertoFriend给朋友的一封信DearTom:Howareyoudoing?Wehaven'tmeteachotherforalongtime.Imissyouverymuch!Lookbackthetimeswespendatelemetaryschool,howhappywewere,andhownortyyo

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请批改（5） A Letter to Friend 给朋友的一封信
Dear Tom :
　　How are you doing ? We haven't met each other for a long time. I miss you very much !
　　Look back the times we spend at elemetary school, how happy we were , and how norty you are ! Last month , I met Mr smith, our math teacher. He has entired two years ago. His body looks well, and he ofter exercise dance with old people in park . How about your parents health ?
　　Otherwise(另外), I have something ask you. I'm taking a bussiness project , and come across some temprate difficout now. Could you borrow me twenty thousand Ywan ? The project has a brillint prospect , and will earn rich dividend . You will get much rewards . Can you agreement ?
　　Wish our friendship long live .


　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours Jack　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　December 27 , 2012

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Dear Tom,
How are you going And how are your parents We haven't met each other for a long time.I miss you very much !
Looking back to the time we spent at the elemetary school ,how happy we were ,and how naughty you were !Last month ,I met Mr.Smith,our math teacher.He had entired for two years.He looked well and he often practised dancing with the old in the park.
Otherwise,I have something to ask you .Now I am taking a business project and coming across some temporal difficulties .Could you lend me twenty thousand Yuan?The project has a brillint future ,and we will earn much from it .There is no doubt that you will get much rewards besides the money you lend to me .Could you agree?
Wish our friendship lives long!
Yours Jack
December 27,2012
回信：
Dear Jack
骗钱的死开!
Yours Tom
December 27,2012