英语作文请大家帮我改一下语法错误,用（）把错误括起来,满分15分请打分Nowwiththedevelopmentofthesociety.Happinessisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.Thestudentshavedifferentviewaboutthehappiness.Someofthe

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英语作文请大家帮我改一下语法错误,用（ ）把错误括起来,满分15分请打分
Now with the development of the society .Happiness is becoming more and more important.The students have different view about the happiness.Some of the students think money lead to happiness because they can buy and do everything if they have enough money.Some of the students think health result in happiness some of students think wealth bring happiness because they can bring their partents to travel all over the world and have spare time.However I think knowledge is the most important thing because knowledge is power and you will do much for mankind.Different people have different views onhappiness .What do you think?

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就像楼上说滴~很多次没注意不可数名词要接动词单三形式哦~
Students have different viewS about happiness.
knowledge is power.power--POWERFUL 此处需要形容词
you will do much for mankind.will-can
they can bring their partents(拼写错了) to travel all over the world and have spare time.觉得整句话不怎么对
they can company their parents travelling and enjoy themselves because they can have more spare time.
纠正楼上一点~think是可以做及物动词滴~所以最后一句是没错滴~