帮我看看不管是内容还是语法,欢迎纠正Whatdoyoulikeatyourjob?Ilikethisjobverymuchbecauseofthefriendlycolleagueandgoodleader.Moreover,thenewcompanyprovidesmealotofopportunitiestolearnnewthings.Whatareyourm

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Whatdo you like at your job?
I like this job very much because of the friendlycolleague and good leader.Moreover,the new company provides me a lot ofopportunities to learn new things.
What are your mostimportant challenges these days,months?
Idiscovered that I still have a lot to learn.
What ambition do you have in your job?What is very importantto you?
I hope that I can play an indispensable role ,notonly in finance department but in whole company as well in the coming two or three year.
Theimportant thing to me is grow with the company and share the achievement .
How do you spendyour leisure time?
In my leisure time,I usually go to learnEnglish in the training center and I also learn financially knowledge by myself.Besides,I listen to music,watch movies ,dine together or travel with myfriends

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语法上没有什么大的问题,最后再说.先说点内容上的：
喜欢一个工作,应该主要说喜欢工作内容,比如工作和你的专业对口,工作的内容就是你想要做的等等,其他的有好的同事,好的领导可以说,但要放到后面.能学到什么东西最好举一个例子.
Iearn new things,such as:
挑战：一定要举例,你说还有好多要学,举例说明.否则太空洞.
 
语法,就是最后一句：我给你改一下：
  
        I usually go to a training center to learn English.I also learn financial knowledge by myself.Sometimes I listen.