大家帮我看看我自己翻的短文有问题没Awomanissinging.Agirlsays:‘Whataterriblevoice!’Thensheaskaman:‘Doyouknowwhosheis?’‘Yes.’Themananswer.‘Sheismywife.’‘Oh,Ibegyourpardon.’Thegirlsays,Ofc

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大家帮我看看我自己翻的短文有问题没
A woman is singing.A girl says:‘What a terrible voice!’Then she ask a man:‘Do you know who she is?’
‘Yes.’ The man answer.‘She is my wife.’
‘Oh,I beg your pardon.’The girl says,Of course her voice is not bad,but the song is very bad.I want to know who wrote this song
I did.The man answer.

Answer 1

1.对话需要在提示语前面；
2.整篇文章需要统一格式,如果没有看错的话,出现了一般现在式（ A girl says:）、现在进行式（A woman is singing.）,建议这种故事形文章改用过去式；
3.英文中是不提倡用“：”的,建议你把“：”去掉；
4.（I did.The man answer.)这句标点有问题吧.
____吉天成