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英语作文找错并改正,）
Today's college students face choices unheard of years ago.Terms like two way selection,self-employment are not new to them.Many students swarm into job market or look every talent fair for potential employers.The concept of selling oneself rather than hiding oneself is well accepted by students.
Hunting a job is no small matter.Instead,it is probably one of the most,if not the most,important decisions any of would-be graduates can make in a lifetime.Therefore,they are very serious and cautious when that time comes.It is something that the society has taught them.
As the job market gets shrinking,it has also become a must for undergraduates to work harder than before to keep their competitive edge .More students are engaged in their studies with no distractions .They are investing today for a promising tomorrow.

Answer 1

第一行choices 后加is
第二行are 改为is
第三行swarm--swarmed
第四行
第五行well--good
第六行no--not
第七行any--all
第八行a 去掉
第九行comes--coming
第十行