在线翻译的作文,求高手改一改.一.overseasstudyatanEarlyAgesyoushouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheouttone(看不清楚,也可能是outtine)givenbelow:1.目前很多父母在子女高中毕业前就送他们出国学习2

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在线翻译的作文,求高手改一改.
一.overseas study at an Early Ages you should write at least 150 words following the outtone(看不清楚,也可能是outtine) given below:
1.目前很多父母在子女高中毕业前就送他们出国学习
2.形成这种趋势的原因
3.我对此的看法
Overseas Study at an Early Age
More and more parents are eager to send their children abroad to study, some parents put their children before graduating from high school to send them abroad, regardless of any ways at all costs.
Parents to send their children to study abroad is understandable, because they have high expectations of their children, those who study abroad are also success stories that parents send their children abroad. With economic development, domestic companies and institutions a greater emphasis on the successful experience of foreign countries. Therefore, overseas study, to obtain a better future as a shortcut.In addition, there is a fundamental reason, that is, economic capacity, in the past few years, due to rapid economic development, China has more and more parents have the ability to create for their children to study overseas conditions.
As for me, I believe that access to study abroad is undoubtedly a good way of knowledge and experience, but too early to study abroad is neither necessary nor beneficial. Students are too young, or even to take care of yourself. I do think that studying abroad can help a person's self-improvement, but it is best to have completed university studies, have better self-learning ability, and then study abroad.
二.谚语“clothes make the man”.你对此的看法（赞成或反对）以及原因.不少于120字.
The importance of clothing
Often say "clothes make the man make the man," This shows clothing is very important to people. To fully evaluate a person's taste and virtue, although only a small surface area, but ordinary people can not be able to see a person's accomplishments, see the appearance of the clothing as is often the most direct and most critical, as one side faithful mirror, your taste, cultivation, and clearly the mapping out of style.
Real taste of the people never blindly follow the trend of the streets, but many girls do not seem to know this truth. They are always afraid of people that do not understand fashion, so were the faithful attendant street fashion. Dress is exactly the truth. Truly elegant men and women, clothes do not deliberately highlight the color and style, not play an exaggeration, but people can savor. And wear the same clothes, the truth, an attractive stylish woman will never have to go into your body all the accessories.
We feel based on their preferences and to dress themselves, so, can reflect a true self.
主要是语法上的不当,把英语文章改通顺就行了.

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〈第一篇〉Overseas Study at an Early Age
More and more parents are eager to send their children abroad to study, some parents send their children abroad before graduating from high school, regardless of any ways at all costs.
Parents send their children to study abroad is understandable, because they have high expectations of their children, the person who is successful were also sent to study abroad by their parents. Why so many parents send children abroad? Becaues thay want children to have bright future.What's more, in the past few years, with economic development, people are richer and richer in China, more and more parents have ability to create a good environment
for their children to study overseas .
As for me, I believe that study abroad is a good way to learn knowledge and experience, but to study abroad too early is not necessary and beneficial. Students are too young to take care of themrselves. I think that studying abroad can help a person's self-improvement, but the best time to study abroad is the time when you finish collage, becaues you might have better self-learning ability, and chance to study abroad.
〈第二篇〉The importance of clothing
We often say "clothes make the man ," This shows clothing is very important to people. It's not easy to evaluate a person's virtue in a short time, but usually people will look at your wearing. It's the most important and directviewing way to know your taste and your style.
The real meaning of fashion clothing isn't what the surface shows. Many ladies don't know this, they never mind and they don't know what is fashion. Dress is exactly the truth. Truly elegant men and women, clothes do not deliberately highlight the color and style, and no exaggeration. But people still enjoy them. Real gentlest people won't let any fittings get into them. We see can a person reflect a true self by their wearing.
(lz 吖~ 在原文的基础上加之自己的理解,有翻译了一下,应该还好吧,累死哥了~)