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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有l0处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有l0处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2).只允许修改l0处,多者(从第1l处起)不计分.
My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go to work in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself.My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother.Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother,that moved all the people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2).只允许修改l0处,多者(从第1l处起)不计分.
My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go to work in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself.My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother.Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother,that moved all the people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.
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My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.
called
One day my grandparents go to work in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.
went
My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself.
themselves
My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.
when the
Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,
immediately 去掉
my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother.
Ah Bao did all he could∧save my little brother,that moved all the people present.
加to which
Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.
bravery
1.calling改为called.题干中call是用来作dog的后置定语,表达被动,要用过去分词.
2.go改为went.文章讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
3.himself改为themselves.逻辑指代错误,句意表达的他们,要用对应的反身代词.
4.while改为when.句意表达的是正在那时,要用when,相当于at that time.
5.a改为the.第二次提到,是特指他们去的那条河.
6.immediate改为immediately.修饰动词要用副词.
7.about去掉.hear是及物动词,表示听见,不需要添加介词.hear about表达的听说,与句意不符.
8.加to.题干中he could是定语从句,修饰前面的all;could后省略了动词do;to save是作目的状语.
9.that改为which.非限制性定语从句中,不能用that来引导.
10.brave改为bravery.题干中是作介词for的宾语,要用名词形式.
called
One day my grandparents go to work in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.
went
My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself.
themselves
My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.
when the
Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,
immediately 去掉
my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother.
Ah Bao did all he could∧save my little brother,that moved all the people present.
加to which
Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.
bravery
1.calling改为called.题干中call是用来作dog的后置定语,表达被动,要用过去分词.
2.go改为went.文章讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
3.himself改为themselves.逻辑指代错误,句意表达的他们,要用对应的反身代词.
4.while改为when.句意表达的是正在那时,要用when,相当于at that time.
5.a改为the.第二次提到,是特指他们去的那条河.
6.immediate改为immediately.修饰动词要用副词.
7.about去掉.hear是及物动词,表示听见,不需要添加介词.hear about表达的听说,与句意不符.
8.加to.题干中he could是定语从句,修饰前面的all;could后省略了动词do;to save是作目的状语.
9.that改为which.非限制性定语从句中,不能用that来引导.
10.brave改为bravery.题干中是作介词for的宾语,要用名词形式.
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