关于英语的作文你在某家商场买了一双皮鞋,穿了不到一个月就坏了,你要求这家商场退货赔款投诉信［Directions］:Supposethatyouorderedarefrigeratorbutlaterfoundaworryingproblem.Writealetterofcomplaint

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关于英语的作文你在某家商场买了一双皮鞋,穿了不到一个月就坏了,你要求这家商场退货赔款
投诉信
［Directions］:Suppose that you ordered a refrigerator but later found a worrying problem.Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement,Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter,using “Li Ming” instead.
Dear Sir,
I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time.But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities.
After we used it for several days.we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly.When we finally decided to take the temperature in it,we were surprised to find it was around 15℃,far from the standard temperture range from 0℃ to 9℃.
This problem has affected our normal life.Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible?I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming

Answer 1

这篇投诉信投诉的是电冰箱而不是鞋
我不知道这篇短文出自哪里,但其中确实有好几处语法错误：第一句应该是I was very happy```第二句同样时时态错误：But it was a great pity that we found there was something wrong ```第三句After we using it```第三段第二句Would you please let me know whether you can send ```possible or not?