想绣副十字绣,需要绣这么一段话：秋越深,我会更加爱你吗?若即若离中,你是否会触摸我微凉的指尖?执子之手的约定,是否也真的会实现?我想的,一起看每天的日出看微风吹过,发丝拂过脸颊我

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想绣副十字绣,需要绣这么一段话：
秋越深,我会更加爱你吗?
若即若离中,
你是否会触摸我微凉的指尖?
执子之手的约定,
是否也真的会实现?
我想的,
一起看每天的日出
看微风吹过,发丝拂过脸颊
我的心,温柔似水...
轻轻地,轻轻地...
我爱你...
感觉中文太直白,请高手翻译成英文!
另：我这里有朋友帮我翻译的一个版本的,大师们帮忙看看可以吗?
Closer to fall,will I love you more
near and far,
will you touch my coolish fingertip?
the promise between you and me
will be realized?
My wishes are as simple as
watching sunrise
feeling breeze
kissing cheeks by hair
with you
My heart,tender and gentle
I love you

Answer 1

I think,the simple to the
To watch the sunrise every day
See breeze,the wind blowing through the cheek hair
My heart,gentle Things ...
Gently,gently ...
I love you ...