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这几句英文是否正确1.Ithinkthatworshipstarsdoharmthangood2.Itcanletourlivesfullofpassion3.Entertainmentactivitiesarefullofdisappointedanddispirited4.Asforsuchaquestion,peopleviewfromdifferentaspects这几句是我

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这几句英文是否正确
1.Ithink that worship stars do harm than good
2.It can let our lives full of passion
3.Entertainment activities are full of disappointed and dispirited
4.As for such a question,people view from different aspects
这几句是我写的英语作文,总觉得这几句有点不合适,请指出,改正,如再加以解释就更感激了···
view是不是可数名词?第四句people view
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词汇量不错,只是搭配有些不当.
1.I think worshipping stars is harmful.warship 要用分词形式.
2.It will 后面的let 改成make.
3.去掉full of,如果用它就要接名词了.
4.people have different viewpoints.这种句型很流行的,也简洁.