请帮忙改一篇英语作文dearlucymynameisshelia,thesedays,isufferfromstress.ihavealotofhomeworkeveryday,andihavenochoicebuttodoit,hardlyihaveanysparetimeformyhobbiesandioftenquarrelwithmyparents.inthescho

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请帮忙改一篇英语作文
dear lucy
my name is shelia,these days,i suffer from stress.
i have a lot of homework everyday ,and i have no choice but to do it,hardly i have any spare time for my hobbies and i often quarrel with my parents .in the school i always worried about my marks after exams because my classmates will laugh at me if i got a low marks.the problems almost drives me mad.
yesterday,i learnt a lot about teacher wang's speech i have known how to deal with problems
teacher wang said if we have a lot of homework,we should plan our time carefully.we should not quarrel with our parents,we must communication with them.and do not care about exams if we are worried about exams,we should talk to our teachers.i should pay no attention to people who laugh at me.
Now i know how to deal with problems,I am very thank teacher wang if you have some problems you canalso tell him.he must help you!
Best wishes
shelia
可能有许多语法错误,

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帮你修改了一下 应该是没有问题了
注意要把每个句子的开头字母写成大写哦~
作文总体还写得不错呢 加油!
Dear Lucy
my name is Shelia,these days,i am suffering from stress.
i have a lot of homework everyday ,and i have no choice,so I have to do it,.I hardly have any spare time for my hobbies and i often quarrel with my parents .At school i always worried about my marks after exams because my classmates will laugh at me if i got low marks.the problems almost drives me mad.
yesterday,i learnt a lot about teacher wang's speech,and i knew how to deal with problems
teacher wang said if we have a lot of homework,we should plan our time carefully.we should not quarrel with our parents,we must communicate with them.and do not care about exams if we are worried about exams,we should talk to our teachers.i shouldn't pay attention to people who laugh at me.
Now i know how to deal with problems,I am very thankful about teacher wang .if you have some problems you can also tell him.he will help you!
Best wishes
shelia