EveryoneislearningEnglish,becausetheEnglishisanimportantlanguageintheworld,butherEnglishistoodifficultforustolearn,suchus,can’twritethecompositionwell,ontgoodatreading,noteasyforustorememberandsoon.Whatarethe

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Everyone is learning English,because the English is an important language in the world,but her English is too difficult for us to learn,such us,can’t write the composition well,ont good at reading,not easy for us to remember and so on.What are the good methods?How can we get it?Firstly,we can speak and learn every day.We can read and write as well.At first,l couldn’t learn English well,because the questions were too difficult for me to answer,so l was very upset.Secondly,we can with the help of our teacher.We will have made much progress.Finally,we can learning English study,because it one of the important thing in learn Engish.Learning English is an important thing of people’s life,because learning English will help us in our life.请尽量不要动太多~

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“because the English is”去掉the,“but her English is too” her English用it替代就好了,“such us,can’t write the composition well”还不如改成“In terms of us,we can't.” "Firstly,we can speak and learn every day.We can read and write as well." learn和write的后面加一个名词,English或是什么的.用了Firstly,下面就不要再用At first了“Secondly,we can with the help of our teacher.
”can后面要加东西.“We will have made much progress.”have made换成make.“because it one of the important thing in learn Engish.”这句直接删掉吧,错太多了.