求英语高手订正作文（英标忽略）LearntofaceIrememberwhenIwasinelementary[,ɛlə'mɛntərɪ]schoolIwasafraidexam.Eachtimetakesaexam.Iwastension['tɛnʃən]andfear.I'mafraidto

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求英语高手订正作文 （英标忽略）
Learn to face
I remember when I was in elementary [,ɛlə'mɛntərɪ] school I was afraid exam.Each time takes a exam . I was tension ['tɛnʃən] and fear. I'm afraid to see parent’s disappointed [,dɪsə'pɔɪntɪd] eye. Middle school later, Tony always said “ don't be afraid to exam.try your best . You will win the exam.” Now I'm not afraid of exam. I put the exam as a chance to prove myself .
I only have overcome [,ovɚ'kʌm] the fear, the dream won‘t end. I should learn to face

Answer 1

1.afraid---afraid of
2.Each time takes a exam -----each time taking part in an exam
3.tension 是名词,应该改为tensive,fear--fearfull
4.eye--eyes 用复数
5.Middle school later----after finisihing middle school
6.win the exam ---succeed the exam
7.put the exam as---regard the exam as
8.i only have--i just overcome
补充一句,你的词汇问题不大,主要问题在于你的汉语思维.
外国人的思维方式和中国人是很不一样的,所以你应该加强这方面的训练.
推荐你听听新东方王强老师的美语口语.