高中短文改错10个OnedayinlastsummerIwenttotowntogoshopping.Afterwalkingaroundforseveralhours,Ifelttired.Ihaveplannedtobuysomebooks,andIwastootiredtowalktothebookstore.ConsideringthatIneededitbadlyforth

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高中短文改错10个
One day in last summer I went to town to go shopping.After walking around for several hours ,I felt tired.I have planned to buy some books ,and I was too tired to walk to the bookstore .Considering that I needed it badly for the coming exam ,I final decided to go there .I arrived at the bookstore ,only find a sign on the door reading "Closed on Mondays",How disappointing I was Complain about my bad luck,I headed for the bus stop.It was only when i got home when I realized it was Tuesday.

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One day in last summer I went to town to go shopping.After walking around for several hours ,I felt tired.I have planned to buy some books ,and I was too tired to walk to the bookstore .Considering that  I needed it badly for the coming exam ,I final decided to go there .I arrived at the bookstore ,only find a sign on the door reading "Closed on Mondays",How disappointing I was !Complain about my bad luck,I headed for the bus stop.It was only when i got home when I realized it was Tuesday.



第二行：have--had   本打算买书
第二行：and--but      表示转折关系
第三行：final--finally  副词修饰动词决定
第四行：only find--only to find  不定式作结果状语,注意是意想不到的结果才用不定式.
第四行：disappointing--disappointed  我是I,是人,所以ed
第五行：Complain--complaining  与主语I是主谓关系,所以用现在分词
第五行：第二个when--that 这是强调句.It was only when i got home that.


看样子没改全啊.
8.第一行：in last--in the last
9.第一行：去掉around
10.第三行：it--them 因为代替的是第二行的some books


前7个没问题,后三个不好说啊,