”theintentionofwritingthislettertoyouisthatIwanttoinformsomethingtoyou.“感觉这个句子读起来乖乖的,谁能帮我完善一些这个句子?读起来怪怪的不是乖乖的

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”the intention of writing this letter to you is that I want to inform something to you.“感觉这个句子读起来乖乖的,谁能帮我完善一些这个句子?
读起来怪怪的不是乖乖的

Answer 1

to inform something to you 说法不对,而且句子有点罗嗦,
这样简洁化就可了：
I am writing to tell you ...
I am writing to inform you ...
The reason for writing this is to inform you that ...
然后接下去写出你的原因.比如
I am writing to inform you of my decision to apply for admission to another university.
The reason for writing this is to inform you that I have decided to apply to another university.