谁能帮我修改一下英语短文,I'mverygladtohavereceivedtheemailyousendmeyesterday.youtoldmeinyouremailthatyou'dliketostudyinaartschool.Iknowthatyouarenotonlylikesinging,andalsoaregoodatdancing.Inmyopinio

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谁能帮我修改一下英语短文,
I'm very glad to have received the email you send me yesterday.you told me in your email that you'd like to study in a art school.I know that you are not only like singing,and also are good at dancing.In my opinion,if you are training properly,you'll be success one day.however,your parent didn't thing it a good idea for you to be a singer or a dancer.they all felt unhappy when you told them our plan.if possible,I will come and visit you this Sunday and do what I can persuade them.

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I'm very glad to have received the email you sent to me yesterday.you told me in your email that you'd like to study in an art school.I know that you not only like singing,but also are good at danci