Nowmoreandmorepeoplearegoingabroadtostudy.Theyareturningouttobeagoodprospect.Thereareseveralreasonsforthat.Firstly,studyingabroadcanhelpwidenthestudentsfieldofvision.Thestudentscanlearnadvancedknowledge.Secondly,st

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Now more and more people are going abroad to study.They are turning out to be a good prospect.There are several reasons for that.Firstly,studying abroad can help widen the students field of vision.The students can learn advanced knowledge.Secondly,studying abroad can cultivate student’s independent.Finally,the students will learn many languages and it's easy for them.
But the other people think that studying abroad has lots of disadvantages.There are several reasons for that.Firstly,the cost of living high,giving the parents a lot of pressure.Secondly,studying abroad must have lots of money.Some families can’t enough it.Finally,the students can not use to the food in a short time in foreign countries.
I think that studying abroad is a good idea,but you must study very hard.As the old saying goes an inch of time is an inch of gold,but you can't buy that inch of time with an inch of gold.Don’t waste time and money!

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Nowadays,more and more people choose to study abroad.
They are turning out to be a good prospect.(这句不明白你要表达什么)
There are several reasons for that.
Firstly,students can broaden their horizons.
The students can learn advanced knowledge.(为什么留学才能学到先进的知识?）
Secondly,studying abroad is a good opportunity that builds maturity and independence.
Finally,the environment plays a role in learning foreign languages.
However,some people think that studying abroad has a lots of disadvantages.
Firstly,the fees and cost of living are high.It is a financial burden to the family.
Secondly,the poor self-discipline will turn out the poor academic performance when their parents are away from them.(重复点,我改了）
Finally,the students might take some time to get used to the foods there.