请各位看看这篇英语文章是否有错误.MyhairisveryshortandItookapairofglasses.Iliketosmile.I'mwarm-hearted,cheerful,andwillingtohelpothers.I'mabletodowhatIresponsiblefortheclass.MyfavoritesubjectisChinese,b

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请各位看看这篇英语文章是否有错误.
My hair is very short and I took a pair of glasses.I like to smile.
I 'm warm-hearted,cheerful,and willing to help others.I'm able to do what I responsible for the class.My favorite subject is Chinese,because it can enrich my cultivation.I also like English very much,because if you learn English well,it will be an interesting subject.I like sports,especially badminton and bicycle riding.Every week I will do exercise together with my friends.My goal in the new semester is to get on well with my classmates and develop good study habits to improve my grades.I will do my best.Thank you.

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My hair is very short and I took(weat) a pair of glasses.I like to smile(最好是改成smiling).
I 'm warm-hearted,cheerful,and willing to help others.I'm able to do what I （加上am）responsible for （加上in）the class.My favorite subject is Chinese,because it can enrich my cultivation（改成knowledge）.I also like English very much,because if you learn English well,it will(改成can) be an interesting subject.I like sports,especially badminton and bicycle riding.Every week I will（去掉will） do exercise together with my friends.My goal in the new semester is to get on well with my classmates and （to）develop good study （studying）habits to improve my grades.I will do my best.Thank you.