sat语法难题一道接招：Used\\\\\\inplaceof(A)\\\\\\\\buttons,hooksandeyes,\\\\\or(B)\\\\\\laces,thezipper\\\\\\\\consistsof(C)\\\\\\\\tworowsofplasticormetalteeth\\\\\\\andbound(D)\\\\\\totheedgesoftwostripsoffabr

Question

sat语法难题一道
接招：
Used \\\\\\in place of (A)\\\\\\\\ buttons,hooks and eyes,\\\\\or(B)\\\\\\ laces,the zipper \\\\\\\\consists of (C)\\\\\\\\ two rows of plastic or metal teeth \\\\\\\and bound (D)\\\\\\ to the edges of two strips of fabric.
\\\\\(E)No error\\\\\
and bound 错了；
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问其他地方为什么没有错,D为什么错了?该怎么改?

Answer 1

官方的解释是有两种改法：去掉and 或者变成that are
The error in this sentence occurs at (D), where there is awkward and wordy phrasing. The conjunction “and” should be either deleted, or replaced by “that are.”
and连接的成分一定要平行 do A and do B doing A and doing B
反对sunchangkai ：至于怎么改 其实不必太细究 毕竟本身就是个错的
有时候要改正确需要整个句子都改
在改的过程中就可以提高水平.考场的时候才不需要想怎么改
LZ想想consist of 与 bound to 平行的可能是基于两者的搭配都是前面加be动词 be consist of.be bound to 如果换一换呢?你可以照sunchangkai这样做题吗?