英语短文改错,急死了!Twelve-year-oldTaylorBernard,whowasbornwithaseriousdisease,hastroublecontrolthemusclesinherbody.Hertwin1.sisterSydneylikessports,whenTaylorhasadifferentinterest:art.2.Taylordelivereda

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英语短文改错,急死了!
Twelve-year-old Taylor Bernard,who was born with a serious disease,has trouble control the muscles in her body.Her twin 1.____ sister Sydney likes sports,when Taylor has a different interest:art.2.____ Taylor delivered a watercolor painting to an art contest.With the 3.____ more than 5,500 students who had applied,only 51 selected.Taylor was 4.____ one of them.Her painting is now at show in Union Station,5____ in Washington,DC.
Taylor and her family had traveled to Washington,DC to attend 6.____ a ribbon-cutting ceremony for the exhibition,calling "State of the 7.____ Art" and to celebrate the accomplishments.每句话后面的横线处改错,最好能写出是为什么错了.

Answer 1

1.control → controlling
固定句型：sb have trouble (in) doing sth 某人做某事有麻烦/困难
2.when → while或but
句意为转折/对比
3.With → Among
句意为“在申请的5500多个学生中,只有51人被选中”.
4.在selected前面加上were
该句为被动语态,所以是“be动词were + 过去分词selected”
5.at → on
固定短语：on show,意思是“在展览中”
6.去掉had
句子时态只需用一般过去时,而无需使用过去完成时（没有另外一个过去动作/时间的对比以表示“过去的过去”）
7.calling → called
句意为“被称为...”,即the exhibition和call之间为被动关系
8.楼主没有打完第八句,不好判断错误.