10个地方有错手打的有可能有得地方打错了Ihavebeentryingrecenttohelpayounggirlwhobegsonthestreet.Afewdaysagoshesharesomegoodnewswithme,ShehadofferedajobinanothertownItisabout150kmawayandshewould

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10个地方有错 手打的 有可能有得地方打错了
I have been trying recent to help a young girl who begs on the street.A few days ago she share some good news with me,She had offered a job in another town It is about 150km away and she would be moving here in a week or so,Realized that moving and starting a new job would require several thing she couldnot afford,I gave some money to her along with ten smile cards,I explained what this was actually two gifts,Money was one gift but the smile cards was her way thanks to whoever had helped her ,I explained that the good gift of all would be the joy she would find it in using those cards.

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I have been trying recent（recently) to help a young girl who begs on the street.A few days ago she share(shared) some good news with me,She had (been)offered a job in another town !It is about 150km(kms) away and she would be moving（be去掉,moving改为move） here in a week or so,Realized（Realizing) that moving and starting a new job would require several thing(things) she couldnot afford,I gave some money to her along with ten smile cards,I explained what(that) this was actually two gifts,Money was one gift but the smile cards was her way thanks(thanking) to whoever(whomever) had helped her ,I explained that the good gift of all would be the joy she would find it(it删掉） in using those cards.