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谁帮我改改这句话?!However,ifwehaveparticipatedinsomeactivitiesinouruniversitylivessuchasstudentorganizationorclubactivities,theseexperiencewouldincreasemorebenefitsforustohuntjobswhencompetingwithothers.改

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谁帮我改改这句话?!
However, if we have participated in some activities in our university lives such as student organization or club activities, these experience would increase more benefits for us to hunt jobs when competing with others.

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However,if we have participated in some organization or club activities during our college life,these experiences would benefits us on our job huntings which competing with others from the society.将o...