表示与此同时的英文比如说,现在很多年轻人去大学读书,与此同时呢,有很多人也投身到教育事业amountingofyoungpeoplegointouniversitiestogetadegree,aswellasmoreandmorepeoplearedevotedthemselvesto

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表示 与此同时 的英文
比如说,现在很多年轻人去大学读书,与此同时呢,有很多人也投身到教育事业
a mounting of young people go into universities to get a degree,as well as more and more people are devoted themselves to education.
这样可以吗?as well as 可不可以换个高级点的短语?
就是两个句子链接的紧密些，不要出现太多的逗号

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比如说,现在很多年轻人去大学读书,与此同时呢,有很多人也投身到教育事业
a mounting of young people go into universities to get a degree,as well as more and more people are devoted themselves to education.
这样可以吗?as well as 可不可以换个高级点的短语?就是两个句子链接的紧密些,不要出现太多的逗号
for example ,a great number of young people go to college for obtaining a degree or a diploma ,meanwhile ,many people are devoted to education career
for example,Some young people choose to go to college ,however,others devote themselves to their education career
A lot of people dedicate themselves to education career when many young people go to college
on the other hand
one the one hand,one the other hand