这句英文有没有语病和更好的写法WANGPengactedasofficedirectorwhowasinchargeofpurchasingofficeappliances,vehiclemanagementandreceivingforeigninvestorsfromDecember1991toMay2004WANGPengactedasofficedirectorwho

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这句英文有没有语病和更好的写法
WANG Peng acted as office director who was in charge of purchasing office appliances,vehicle management and receiving foreign investors from December 1991 to May 2004
WANG Peng acted as office director who was in charge of purchasing office appliances,vehicle management and receiving foreign investors from December 1991 to May 2004 with the monthly income of 700-2000 yuan and 200,000 yuan in total.
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WANG Peng acted as an office director in charge of purchase of office appliances,vehicles management and reception of foreign investors from December 1991 to May 2004 with a monthly income of 700-2000 yuan and 200,000 yuan in total.
如果有中文原意,我应该能修改得更西式一点.我没有改动你的一些用词,仅仅修改了一下句式.