英语作文修改DearMary:Thanksforyourwarmhelp;youradviceaboutlearningEnglishhelpedmealot,thewaysmademegetprogressinEnglish.First,youadvisedmetostudyhard.That’srightbecauseIwaslazy.IwatchedJapanesecartoonstoomu

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Dear Mary:
Thanks for your warm help; your advice about learning English helped me a lot,the ways made me get progress in English.
First,you advised me to study hard.That’s right because I was lazy.I watched Japanese cartoons too much to improve my English skills.I have corrected it now and try my best to study English.Therefore,I got full marks last exam.The next one you advised was to make notes.We listened carefully in class,but meanwhile,we should make notes.I did so,and have got a lot of good things form that.As it is said“A pen is letter than good memory.”Besides,you asked me to practice more.So I took a lot of paper and do some exercises.I did whatever I can to improve my study quality.I’m sure that must help me succeed.
I do thank you very much.Now,I have another problem:“How to improve my spoken shills?”Could you give me some advice for the second time?
I hope we can make progress in study together.
Yours,
Tom

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Thanks for your warm help; your advice about learning English helped me a lot,the ways made me make progress in English.
First,you advised me to study hard.That’s right because I was lazy.I have corrected it now and i try my best to study English.Therefore,I got full marks last exam.The next one you advised was to make notes.We listened carefully in class,meanwhile,we should make notes.I did so,and i have got a lot of good things form that.As it is said“A pen is letter than good memory.”Besides,you asked me to practice more.So I took a lot of notes and do some exercises.I did whatever I can to improve my study quality.I’m sure what i have done must help me succeed.
I do thank you very much.Now,I have another problem:“How to improve my spoken shills?”Could you give me some advice for a second time?
I hope we can make progress in study together.