英语改错,Ourmothersaccompaniedustoschoolinthefirstday.Soonateachercameandledustosomeclassroom.Therewewereputintofourseparateclasses.Somechildrenbegintocryastheparentswerenotallowingintotheclassrooms.Ididnot

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Our mothers accompanied us to school in the first day.Soon a teacher came and led us to some classroom.There we were put into four separate classes.Some children begin to cry as the parents were not allowing into the classrooms.I did not cry because I have been to Kinder-garten before.Actual my mother went home soon after for she knew I would be all right.It was enjoyable time for me as in got to know my new classmates.The teacher was very busy for writing down our information so they had plenty of time to ourselves.In the meantime some children continued to sob although their parents looked in anxiously through the windows.

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Our mothers accompanied us to school in(in - on ) the first day.Soon a teacher came and led us to some classroom(classroom - classrooms ).There we were put into four separate classes.Some children begin(begin - began ) to cry as the parents were not allowing (allowing - allowed )into the classrooms.I did not cry because I have (have - had )been to Kinder-garten before.Actual(Actual - Actually ) my mother went home soon after for she knew I would be all right.It was (加上an )enjoyable time for me as in got( got - getting) to know my new classmates.The teacher was very busy for(去掉for) writing down our information so they(they - we ) had plenty of time to ourselves.In the meantime some children continued to sob although their parents looked in anxiously through the windows