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跪求大神帮忙改英语作文，改的比较正规，如有中式英语请帮忙修改，谢谢！
We Are a Normal
Member of the Big Family of Nature
Better, what a powerful word. Today, there are
so many changes in our lives. Lights cars computers and smart phones……These
inventions brought great convenience to our lives, and made our lives more and more
comfortable. But when we enjoy these great inventions, do we think of
environmental pollution?
We
burn the coal to make electricity, but do we look towards the sky? Is the blue
sky blue? The haze has returned this year. The winter in Beijing has already
been a joke. The people in capital city can only take photo sand publish them to the Weibo. Gagarin
has said that: How beautiful! I saw land, forests, oceans and clouds. But after
100 years, will we say this again? I don’t know.
But people are still
working. 2014 during the APEC, the sky in Beijing is blue. And the APEC Blue
has also been a hot word. This also shows that our
efforts played a certain effect.
All of these, I believe
that, according to our efforts, the world will be better!
One world one dream!

Answer 1

We are all members of the big family of nature.
Better-off, what a beautiful word! Today, there are
so many changes in our lives. Lights, cars, computers and smart phones……These
inventions brought great convenience to our lives, and made our lives more and more
comfortable. But when we enjoy these great inventions, do we think of
environmental pollution?
We burn the coal to make electricity, but do we look at the sky? Is the blue
sky blue? The smog has returned this year. The winter in Beijing has already
been a joke. The people in the capital city can help nothing but take photos and publish them on Weibo. Gagarin said: How beautiful! I saw land, forests, oceans and clouds. But after
100 years, will we see this again? I don’t know.
But there are also people working to improve the environment. In 2014 during the APEC, the sky in Beijing was blue. The APEC Blue was also a hot word. This also shows that our efforts played a certain effect.
Nevertheless, I believe by our efforts, the world will be better!
One world one dream!