ProtectthewaterWateristhemostimportantthingintheEarth.Butnowwaterpollutionisoneofthemostworstproblems,sowemustprotectthewater.Firstly,weshouldn'twastewater.Onewaytocutdownonwateruseistotakeshortershowers.

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Protect the water
Water is the most important thing in the Earth .But now water pollution is one of the most worst problems ,so we must protect the water .
Firstly ,we shouldn't waste water .One way to cut down on water use is to take shorter showers .Another way is to turn off the tap when brushing our teeth or washing our hands .Secondly ,we should save water .Kitchen waste water can be used to water flowers or clean the toilet.
Let's start right now for a better future.

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