Oneday,twostudentswereonthewaytoschool.Then,theysawanoldwomancrossingtheroadslowlyandhardly.Suddenly,theoldwomanslidanddroppedherapples.Thegirlcameandtrytohelpherstandupasfastasshecan.Atthesametime,theboy

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One day ,two students were on the way to school .Then,they saw an old woman crossing the road slowly and hardly.
Suddenly,the old woman slid and dropped her apples.The girl came and try to help her stand up as fast as she can.At the same time,the boy help the old woman pick up the apples patiently and put the apples into basket one by one.The girl supported the old woman with hand to cross the road step by step.The old woman smiled at them and said,'thank you' to them.
At last,the students went to school and felt very happy.How kind the students are
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One day ,two students were on the way to school .Then,they saw an old woman crossing the road slowly and HARD.
Suddenly,the old woman slid and dropped her apples.The girl came and try to help her stand up as fast as she can.At the same time,the boy HELPED the old woman pick up the apples patiently and put the apples into THE basket one by one.The girl supported the old woman with hand to cross the road step by step.The old woman smiled at them and said,'thank you' to them.
At last,the students went to school and felt very happy.How kind the students are !
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