谁可以帮我改一下?September14,2008TodayisMid-AutumnFestival.wecan’tgotoschool.Ifellveryexcited.Ireceivemanypresents.Forexamplecongratulatorycallsandletters.Inthenewclass.Ifeelverynervous.BecausenewclassmatesIdo

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谁可以帮我改一下?
September 14,2008
Today is Mid-Autumn Festival .we can’t go to school.I fell very excited.
I receive many presents.For example congratulatory calls and letters.
In the new class.I feel very nervous .Because new classmates I don’t recognize.But I have new good deskmate.His name is ZDh I like him very much.Because he studies very well.
I usually ask him questions.He always patient teach me.

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September 14th,2008
Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival.we needn't go to school.I feel very excited.I receive many presents.For example,congratulatory calls and letters.In the new class,I feel very nervous .Because I don’t know my new classmates.But I have a new deskmate.He is good.His name is ZDh and I like him very much.Because his study is very good.I usually ask him some questions.He is always patient with teaching me.