短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
     删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
     修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
     注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
                 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student,I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single
room in next term,as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties
at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me a lot. So I hope
to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only
solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building but as near to the school campus
as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
     Best wishes.
                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,
____________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single
                              1. an  
room in next term,as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties
       2. 去掉                                                                                                                    3. holds
at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me a lot. So I hope to
         4. making                                                                             5. which   6. disturbs
draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only 
              7. attention                                                                              8. you
solution for me is ∧ get a room of my own, one not in the same building but as near to the school campus
                         9. to
as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
                                  10. grateful
     Best wishes.
                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely,