司马光砸缸英语作文求纠正错误Ononeoccasion,SimaGuangwithhisfriendsplayedinthegarden.Theyplayedaninterestinggamecalledhideandfound.Oneofthemwanttohideinalargewatertanks,thischildclimbupthetanktohide.Acc

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司马光砸缸 英语作文 求纠正错误
On one occasion,SimaGuang with his friends played in the garden.They played an interesting game called hide and found.One of them want to hide in a large water tanks,this child climb up the tank to hide.Accidentally,he fell into the tank .The water in the tank is deep,the other children see someone into trouble scared weeping,shouting,went outside for help for adults.Only Sima Guang is calm.He pick up a big rock from the ground ,and then hit it to the water tank ,"Bang!" The rock broke the water tank,some water ran over and the child kids was saved.
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Today I want to tell you a story about a wise man ,he’s name is Sima Guang.
From this story,we can found Sima is a wise man,when the other chidren is weeping.he is clever but also calm .we should be calm when we meet something very difficult then we will be a wise msn too.

Answer 1

hide and found应该改为hide and seek,want改为wanted,tanks改为tank,climb改为climbed,see改为saw,for help for adults改为to ask adults for help,pick改为picked,child kids 改为child