英语作文改错Monday,March10,2008warmYesterday,Isaidtomygrilfriend,Ilongedforsuccess,sinceIhadlostintheexamination.NomoretimecouldIstanduptowaste.Therefore,Iwassorry,mylove,Ishouldmakethemostoftheleavingtime,Ih

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英语作文改错
Monday,March 10,2008 warm
Yesterday,I said to my gril friend,I longed for success,since I had lost in the examination.No more time could I stand up to waste.Therefore,I was sorry,my love,I should make the most of the leaving time,I hoped you could live with my selfish idea.In nature,sometimes,I even considered that I can not live up to you,as your boy friend,I made myself out of place to care for you,however,I also hoped you could keep pace with me in studing,I kown ,you can’t do it,maybe it was too much for you to be such industry,on occasion,I want to help you in studing,but I can not do well in mine,to saying nothing to help you,sorry ,what I could give you isn’t worth to remain,I hope you can understand me

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总的来将,全问的时态不太一致.就连个别句子前后时态都不太一直,不知道你要表达什么时候的事.具体的有一些我所知道的语法问题,不全面,请谅解.
1.since I had lost in the examination.
在考试中失败,未通过.应该是failed in the examination.
2.I should make the most of the leaving time
我应该利用好剩下的时间.应该是left time.
3.I even considered that I can not live up to you
can改为 could
4.maybe it was too much for you to be such industry,
或许,让你在那个领域对你来说太过分了.to be in such industry.
5.to saying nothing to help you
更别说帮你了.应改为let alone help you或者not to mention helping you.
6.what I could give you isn’t worth to remain
我能给你的不值得保留.把could 改为can.worth to remain改为worth remaining.be worth doing