谁能帮我改一下作文急InJuly2001,BeijingacquiredtherighttoholdtheOlympicGamesin2008.AtthesameyearNovember,ChinajoinedtheWTO.Nowadays,thenumberofthepeoplewhostudyEnglishinsparetimehadincreasedtobecloseto70%

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谁能帮我改一下作文急
In July 2001,Beijing acquired the right to hold the Olympic Games in 2008.At the same year November,China joined the WTO.Nowadays,the number of the people who study English in spare time had increased to be close to 70%.Each Taxi driver could at least say 100 English expressions.

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In July 2001,Beijing acquired the right to hold the Olympic Games in 2008.At the same year November,China joined in WTO.Nowadays,it had increased to be close to 70% that the number of the people who study English in spare time .Each Taxi driver could say 100 English expressions at least.