Abasketballmatchwillbeholdat3:00-5:00p.m.,Friday,November15ontheplayground.ThetwoteamsarefromEnglishDepartmentandChineseDepartment.AllstudentsofEnglishDepartmentareaskedtoattendontime.TheStudentUnionNovember8,2006

Question

A basketball match will be hold at 3:00-5:00p.m.,Friday,November 15 on the playground.The two teams are from English Department and Chinese Department.All students of English Department are asked to attend on time.
The Student Union
November 8,2006

Answer 1

首先,我觉得总的来说,你写的就没什么问题.我帮你改了一下,这样子会看上去更好一些.


      We want to hold the match at 3:00-5:00 p.m on Friday,15/11 on the playground.
      我们想要在11月15日在操场上下午3点到5点举行比赛.
      We have the two teams,one is English team,two is Chinese team,we will join the match.
      我们有两个队伍,第一个名字叫做,英国队伍,第二个名字叫做中国队伍,我们将会加入比赛.
      All students will catch on time join in the English team and Chinese team.So happy we are.Sounds great!
      所有的学生都将会来看我们的比赛.我们真是太开心了.这件事情听上去真是太棒了!（想起来就开心!）


BR
The student union 
November 15 ,2014