我写的英语文章有什么错误Ihavelivedin00forayear,Ihaveseensomanybadbehaviors,likespite,talkloudlyandleavegarbageeverwhereyousee.I'mreallynotcomfortablewiththese,onemore,thereisn'taspecialsnackbar,someoft

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我写的英语文章有什么错误
I have lived in 00 for a year, I have seen so many bad behaviors,like spite,talk loudly and leave garbage everwhere you see.I'm really not comfortable with these,one more ,there isn't a special snack bar ,some of them even worse.the excellent snack only in some 酒楼,they are more expensive,but the taste is pretty good.I mean I wish that the chefs in 酒楼 opening thier own snack bar,then the customers needn't pay for the cost of serving,covers and something else. That can make the prices low so it attracts people come and consume easily and we should kick the people who do bad behaviors out of this town.

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spite 如果是吐痰的意思应该是spit
又应为like是介词 后面应该是动名词 用ing spitting talking leaving
everwhere you can see会更好
there isn't a special snack bar ,and some of them even worse.《加连词and》
I mean I wish that the chefs in 酒楼 open thier own snack bar 虚拟语气
so it attracts people to come and consume easily attract sb to do
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