英语好的朋友,帮我改一下错好么·Thisworkisveryrelaxed,practicemorethanamonthIwouldlikeformalemployeeinchargeofadepartment,itistooeasy,Ican’tlearnmorethings.andIthinkIamstillyoung,shouldlearnsomething,and

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英语好的朋友,帮我改一下错好么
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This
work is very relaxed,practice more than a month I would like formal employee
in charge of a department,it is too easy,I can’t learn more things.and I
think I am still young,should learn something,and then stronger
than now ,but not pay the
youth in a computer.
I have to admit,I was indeed longing
for such a simple life.But sometimes I want to be someone like you,do ur job to
influence others,let others remember u because ur job,I think this is the
meaningful life.
But in China,a lot of time doing
things smooth,concerned over their own efforts,many others like me want to
seriously study,life of young people gradually will be real shake,then no
ambition.Until I met you,you are a serious and responsible work attitude,
infected me,makes me want to do their own.
And Bill(did u know him?),last year in
Deyang,he was stricken with heart block,every day we take turns to take care
of him,at that time I thought he was going to Australia will never come to
China in the work.Did not expect that half a year later,he lost his belly,
thin half,but still full of spirit to give us lessons.I think that very few
Chinese in his age would make such choice,I admire him,he was very kind to
me.(it seems that I really was a good student ah).

Answer 1

看看时态和第三人称单数
if引导的条件状语从句或if引导的时间状语从句是主将从现
relaxed改为relaxing