Hi,everyone.Iamaactiveandconfidentgirl.Itismyhonortobeheretoday.Today,Ihopemakemyselfbetterhere.AndIwanttoenterthesemi-finals.IthinkIcandefeatanyoneelse.MaybeIamnotthebest,butIwilltrymybesttolearnEnglish.SoIw

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Hi,everyone.I am aactive and confident girl.It is my honor to be here today.Today,I hope makemyself better here.And I want to enter the semi-finals.I think I can defeatanyone else.Maybe I am not the best,but I will try my best to learn English.So I will exercise my ability andexhibit my talent.Thank you very much.
请问上面的一段话里有没有什么语法错误,如果有请指出谢谢急求.另外这个能够塞满一分钟吗

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第一个：active 和confident 位置最好对调,因为如果active发音是元音开头（具体忘了）,就要改a为an
第二个：Hope后面跟从句that ,句子缺少主语,还一点就是Hope从句是难以实现的 愿望,一般用wish,否则就用hope to do.
第三个：abilities,talents,一般是要加个s,表多种,
希望不会出错.